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Claudia Salas Beauty obsessions Sometimes beauty can go way to far

1.)Introduction: General information about beauty -Concrete Detail (supporting evidence from research) - Child beauty pagents are harmful -Concrete Detail (supporting evidence from research) - some pagent toddlers are getting death threats -Concrete Detail (supporting evidence from research) - Should go outside and play with with friends not putting on makeup
 * Thesis statement Beauty going skin deep is hurting cisiaty

2.)Body Paragraph #1- Topic sentance (subject+opinion)This should be your first main idea or claim -Concrete Detail ( suppoting evidence from research) how beauty is hard to live with in other countries(what beauty is in other countries) -Concrete Detail ( suppoting evidence from research) a woman starved herself in paris to look good -Concrete Detail ( suppoting evidence from research) a woman bleached her in china skin and now has skin problems

3.)body paragraph #2 -Topic Sentence(subject+opinion) This should be your second be your second main idea or claim -Concrete detail (supporting evidence from research)obsessions with being thin leaving girls hurt in pagents(an obsession with thinness in pagents)(page43) -Concrete detail (supporting evidence from research)girls are ment to give a good example. -Concrete detail (supporting evidence from research)should have a limit on how much a girl should weigh